Sleeping Valor

I was prepared not to like it....but I did. =P So much I was too busy reading to notice ways of helping you make it better, so unless you'd like ...

OOC Thanks a bunch, that's very helpful. ^_^ From what you're saying I'm going to assume a half witch can cast spells (so long as it is within her power) ...

“Mommy, why did you have to wake me up?” she whined and looked around and saw that a bunch of cabbage leaves were lying in their burrow. Two 'and's in ...

OOC I'd like to join, but I'm a little confused. The time period has me a little confused since we seem to have space-pirates, trucks and princesses, which is future, ...

o_O Umm...are you sure this shouldn't be in the poetry section?

I liked it. It's a nice, quick, fun read that still has enough of a hook to make you wonder what happens next. I'd keep working on it if it ...

LOL. I was thinking I will comment here as well since something has just occured to me: This reads like a drama. That may of course be your intention but ...

IC As Keith reached the car, the girl unlocked the doors and got into the passenger's seat. She sat there unmoving until he, after re-assessing the situation for the hundredth ...

o_O Color? *sees the whole thing as a movie in her head* ^_^ I very much liked the story, it was excellent. At first Paul's place in the story seemed ...

Don't you mean "He, being the object of my affection, is so graceful and talented..."? And it looks good to me, but then again that's because I assume you mean ...

Belgee was on the verge of something great, something amazing, something so big he had no choice but to open his mouth...and inhale as much air as he could before ...

I just read the Warrior Heir too, I didn't realise there was more though. I'll have to go looking for the rest. =P I thought the book was good and ...

Well if we're all going to suffer then maybe it really means "You won't survive" Or.... Youths withour supper Yoda Wearing Slippers Yummy Worm Soup Youth's With socks

OOC: Umm....well Keith seems to know what he's doing, so maybe your char can sort of latch unto him (though it will drive him nuts) and hey can travel together ...

OOC omg, i was soo confused for a second there. Kendal's mind is in Trinity's body, but you are calling her Trinity, right? >.< And I am assuming she ran ...